Trent was around trouble his whole life. Whether it was his
mother getting caught for the use of marijuana, or another crime committed by
his brother, it seemed he could never get away. That reflected on him too,
because he looked up to them, and thought it was okay to be violent. At 15, he
already had a criminal record. He didn’t want to live this way, but he couldn’t
find anything to keep him away from his family long enough to figure out how to
turn his life around.
School was hard, but he had one passion that never changed;
basketball. The varsity team tryouts were just around the corner, and Trent
wanted in. Sure enough, e played well both sessions of the tryouts, and made
the team first string. Trent became a better teammate, and his team became his second
family. Overall, he became a better teammate and a better kid, and that had a
positive influence on his family and friends, and with that, it helped their
team win.
Throughout the story, Trent grew as a basketball player and
as a teammate. He found that his teammate lived down the street from him, so he
played basketball with him every night throughout basketball’s long
season. Basketball kept Trent out of
trouble and turned his attitude about
life around and ultimately made him a better person and will make him a better
man for the rest of his hopefully long life.
I thought your title fit the writing piece very well. Also, you had good voice in your writing piece.
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